Yeah. Good Times.: TGIF, bitches! Also, though? A story scaffold

Friday, January 27, 2012

TGIF, bitches! Also, though? A story scaffold

Today you can find me over at Just Jennifer's place, talking about stuff that makes me happy. There are drawings. Of me...... messing with my kid. *giggle* Because messing with my kid's head makes me happy.....

Here's something else that makes me happy, though. This is a scan of some class work that Child 2 brought home yesterday. I've erased the names, but this was (soooo obviously) done by him and a girl, and it's just so goddamned adorable I can even stand it. I've transcribed it below, since 6 year old handwriting is hard to read for some reason (I corrected the grammar and punctuation because I'm anal like that, I'm anal like that, I'm anal like that, I'm anal like that.....)

Story Scaffold

Title of Story: Barbie and Yoshi

This story begins when Yoshi falls into Barbie's world

The problem is Yoshi can't get back

The next thing that happens is Barbies find Yoshi

Then Barbie says "what the heck?"

After that, Yoshi puts Barbie in his mouth

The problem is solved when Yoshi gets back to his own world.

There is just so much awesome there, I can't even describe it....

Happy Friday! YAY!!

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Jim Reeve · 687 weeks ago

That's fantastic. I love the way young kids think and their imagination is endless. Strangely enough, I had no problem reading or following the story. Maybe it's because I have a little one.
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Jenn@Fox in the City · 687 weeks ago

I knew that you were over at Jen's today . . . but I actually don't know how I knew that!

Now, back to the incredible cutness that is Child 2's work! Ahhhhhhhh, I love it. :)
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Michelle · 687 weeks ago

Great Job on the story scaffold! :-)

But what I really noticed, the handwriting looks identical to my son's handwriting. He is 16 now and doesn't write in cursive, only print, and it looks just like what you posted above. WOW!

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Mayor Gia · 687 weeks ago

Awwww, what a cute little story!! YAY YOSHI!
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Just Jennifer · 687 weeks ago

Hahaha, that's too cool! Know what else is cool? That you're AT MY PLACE TODAY! Come on over, guys!
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Christian at PCPPP · 687 weeks ago

You need to turn that into a film treatment and get it to Universal or Paramount asap. We'll get Liam Neeson to play the part of Yoshi. Maybe a Charlize Theron type for Barbie. It's going to be fantastic.
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Miss Mommy · 687 weeks ago

Oh my gosh - that is so totally obviously written by a boy and a girl it is hysterical!!

And the fact that Barbie says, "What the heck?" - love it!

Thanks so much for sharing that.
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Sarcasm Goddess · 687 weeks ago

That might just be the best story every constructed. I especially like the twist of Yoshi putting Barbie in his mouth.
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jillsmo 103p · 687 weeks ago

Personally I'm glad it wasn't the other way around

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Cactusinyrpants 59p · 687 weeks ago

Barbie doesn't even have a mouth that opens, not only that, but Yoshi is like 8 times bigger than barbie, I mean seriously, how could it be the other way around? That's like impossible.

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solodialogue 73p · 687 weeks ago

Too adorable! Child 2 is working that co-author angle with the chicks, eh? Great work. I too, am glad it was not the other way around. .. ; )

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andrea · 687 weeks ago

I smell a sequel!
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pugariffic 41p · 687 weeks ago

that is so awesome! lol

WHAT THE HECK!!?
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asideofrice 30p · 687 weeks ago

I'm now anxiously awaiting the Barbie and Yoshi movie. Tell your kid to get working on that screenplay!

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tasbranded · 629 weeks ago

I'm also glad it's not the opposite. That may be the best story each constructed.

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